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You know that one thought,
That makes you squirm inside?
Maybe it makes you giggle,
Like your stomach is bringing in the tide?

That one thought,
That makes you double take,
Or doubt.
Maybe makes you feel fake?

It could be a loving thought,
Maybe "I love you"?
But maybe it makes you stomach feel taught,
Like another friend gone.

That one thought always in the back of your mind,
But when you dig to find it,
Sometimes it's hard to find.
'Cause you push it to the back.

That thought that maybe makes you hate
Yourself.
Of maybe makes you believe in fate.
Or inquires who you really are.

It gives you feelings that you didn't know you had.
Gives you maybe hatred, love, anger…
Remember that you shouldn't feel bad.
Remember that it's only one thought.
That one thought. Don't you hate that? It's that one nagging you. That one that makes you think twice. Sometimes it might save your life, but sometimes...
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SarcasticFreaks Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
I really like this! You're a very excellent writer....
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you. :D
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mandyraw Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
May i use this for a school project, ill credit you.

I just need to find a poem and write what you used in the poem and how it connects to me.
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah, You can. :)
Could you send me a "note" with what you came up with?
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