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I've been up all night,
Fighting a war I can't win,
This theological fight,
That I'm having with no one but me.

My blankets twist and wrinkle
Thinking of my flaws,
My shallow thoughts, my heart so fickle.
Crying so much that I make my throat raw.

I don't know if I can trust
Myself for all that I've done…
My voice turned to rust
As I cry out for someone, anyone.

I need someone to hold me.
To tell me it's all okay.
Holding me, but still setting me free.
I need to be loved.
I'm having trouble with myself lately...and lately I've been up really late...thinking about...stuff.
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IndyAndArtemis Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You need to write songs! haha wow
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I do ^-^ Thanks (I'm hoping that's a good "wow")
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IndyAndArtemis Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That was a good "wow". Lol
:da:
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Jesus-mothic-freak Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
this is good.. and i understand how u feel..
i love how you've put enough emotion into it but not too much that it becomes artificial
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you. I do try :D
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SarcasticFreaks Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
This is just.....wow. I love it. Excatly how I feel sometimes, you're good at capturing feelings and emotions.
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you. :)
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ExaltedPoet Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
its good we all rethink after we submit our deviations thinking if it was written well or not. check out my gallery and you'll see what I mean.
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student General Artist
alright...and thank you.
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ExaltedPoet Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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